
The blog is called “El Blog del Deniel”. The name says a lot of his personality, a shy person (only when he wants to) but at the same time a very funny guy with a special personality.
I need to say that Daniel has improved his English a lot. When I first met him his English was not very fluent and the grammar was not the best too. He is my personal friend and that is why I know that he is always giving his best to do the homeworks, the readings and the different activities that we have on these class or in any other subject.
I like the way that he refers to the different topics because he tries to give us the idea of what he has in mind but he need to improve some aspects.
His blog is a little bit plain. He need to give it more color and a picture to each of the topics to have a better idea of what is he feeling or what is the idea of the post.
His grammar is very good, he has improved a lot that part of his English knowledge but he need to focus in how to create a better text, with connectors in it and with more defined paragraphs to catch the whole idea of what he is trying to say.
Finally I have to say that Daniel has improved in the majority of the topics and it is something very good to know for me because he is my friend and I know about the effort that he does to improve. However, he need to keep going on this way because is the only way to improve, studying more and more.
I agree with you. Daniel did a very good job. I do not know him very much, but I have to say that he's improved a lot and also I thing that all of us have improved.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you my mother Franco. Deniel has more skill than he used to have. He is learning faster and improving his language, although I have to say that he is still a little bit shy, but only when he wants like you said before. Go ahead Deniel ¡you can do it! like The Offspring song jajaja
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